Secret Lair Shipping PART 10by =ItamiHachiko

Flash / Animations

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Single pages: [link]

Part 9:

PART 11:

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peep peep peep.
you are now watching a flashback happening.
I hope I made that clear? .w.
I paniced when i noticed i kinda never really said anywhere in the doujin that it's a flash back /shot
hope the combination of last page from part 9+ Mason thinking "I remember it blah blah" was enough e___e

i always get the feeling everything looks so wannabe dramatic lol.
if so help me , tell me how to change it |'D;;

I'm accepting critique in general this time since I'm actually quite pleased how this part turned out .u.
So if you have any tips for improvement just say it~

Not sure if I already mentioned this here too but the scene here was actually not planed to appear fully because I had absolutely no idea and also found it rather boring to think up that much dialogue for it. Also bc it's getting rather complicated and I could make more mistakes LMAO
Anyway, I listened to music from Repo and then suddenly

KABOOM ALL THE DRAMATIC DIALOGUE CAME UP TO MY HEAD CAUSING ME TO WRITE AN ENTIRE PAGE OF DIALOGUE FOR PART 10 AND 11.

IDEK

But planing the dialogue before drawing actually works better now in my oppion .u.
And the music is probably also the reason for constant hysterical screaming and mood changes in this part. LMAO.

Also changed the speech bubbles and drew them freehand like in SoaE
And the size of the pages. I think it's better to see the entire page from the start like everywhere else. I only kept the size bigger cause some tones simply became grey instead of dotted which I now managed to fix c:

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YEAH AND THERE , HAVE A CLIFFHANGER.

For the next part: We will get to know why Mason likes honey |'D